WALT: Use exciting language to make sentences more interesting. 
Read the sentence, then on the line below rewrite the sentence using more exciting language. You can add more detail to the sentence if you think that will make it more interesting!
If you get stuck, use a thesaurus to find words that have the same meaning but a bit more WOW factor! Here is the link to one.
1. The man walked down the road.
EXAMPLE: The old man stumbled down the long dusty road.
The boy was tired.
The boy was extremely exhausted
2. After school Luke went to get an ice-cream, it tasted nice.
After a long boring day at school Luke got a freezing cold ice cream. It was delicious
The couch was soft.
3.The man was driving his car and the police were called.
The man was driving crazly and the police was called
4The milk was cold.
The milk was intensely cold
5.During the rugby game, the audience was loud.
During the rugby game the audience was was yelling like crazy
6.The girl walked to the supermarket.
The young girl wandered to the packed supermarket
7.Lucy went to the movies, she said it was a scary movie.
Lucy went to the big movie theaters and and watch a spine chilling movie, she said it was horrifying
8.His face had a big beard on it.
There was a big brown hairy beard glued to his face
The team were talking loudly on the sideline.
9.It was a hot day so the students found bikes hard.
It was a burning hot day and student found it hard to exercise on there bikes
10.It was a sunny day
It was a bright yellow sunny day
11.It was raining heaps
It was pouring down cold fresh with rain.
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